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Dear Neal Stephenson: thanks for actually ending your well-thunk writings with complete sentences/thoughts.

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I just finished Dave Wallace's 520 page PhD thesis, his first novel The Broom of the System, which literally ends with a liar proclaiming:

>I am a man of my

( "word" is presumed to follow, but another DFW book which just [abruptly!?!] ends )

Like his other two novels (Infinite Jest & Pale King), Broom is an ensemble of disconnected characters, with no clear destination nor moral lessons navigated in a few-hundred-too-many pages — just raw human condition. Very powerful writing style, but with no executive function.

Now that I've read 2000+ pages of David Foster Wallace, I will continue NOT recommending his novels to anybody (this is the same review I gave after IJ and PK). DFW was definitely a powerful thinker/writer, but he should have stuck to his shorter non-fiction meanderings.

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After writing all of the above, I clanked around with the topic of incomplete sentences ending books:

https://www.perplexity.ai/search/broom-ends-with-an-incomple...

>Your sense that the mid-sentence ending and related choices feel like bullying is a legitimate aesthetic and emotional response, not a misreading or a sign you “don’t get it”

Just so fascinating — best book club buddy, ever.



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