What is the specific criticism? You believe it should not be reported on? Or you simply don't like the tone (in which case, why are you omitting that)?
He wasn't the "head of cybertruck" - if you look at his LinkedIn, he was a lead program manager. Still an important cog in the machine, but he'd been there for 8 years from an intern.
Model Y guy makes it sound like he was more of a key person, though.