Just run a second LLM pass on it and adjust the writing style by feeding it examples. Then run a final manual pass on it and remove the unnecessary parts.
Write shorter. Half the words would have worked.
Besides that, it’s embarrassing for me to read, because our spot on describes me.
I have one coping strategy: when I’m taking care of my kid, or it’s a day off work where I’m grumpy because I left my dopamines at the office: I tell myself, I don’t get to enjoy computers all day. Knowing that resets my expectations and I can better enjoy family time.
Took my entire 6 month paternity leave and 3 months of work before I finally “got it”. Still a struggle. But just being not cranky is a gigantic life improvement, my wife says.
Ill try and adjust a next one. Generally just talk my story, maybe a podcast would benefit me more